double canvas paves the compass needle swinging, cuts my world
in half and tick tick time is singing look at how events unfurled
map frame doesn't seem to cut it, no, you must put on a show
girl dance for us and we will judge your skills do nothing, then we go
for ice cream's good but bread is better but not with butter not with butter
up we swing till our universe dings to show its ready for our lies.
ahhhhhhhhhh i loveeeeee this!!!!
ReplyDeletei really like the beginning about the compass needle swinging... this is a FANtastic poem :)
ReplyDeleteI ove the way the first two lines fow! It seems like the ocean waves are rolling you back and forth!!!
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