Tuesday, November 2, 2010

Underground System

Hey ya'll... reflection poem, I'm thinking? So feedback? Danke. :)

One of these days the world will crash
Oblivion
Boom
Done.
Political vehicles evacuate the politicians
And the people smart or scared enough to seek them out
There was too much following of followers following leads
So our Earth tried to follow the Sun to follow the trend but that's not the
Natural way of the solar system
So
Like I said,
Oblivion,
Boom,
story ends slowly then,
Ashes.
Life is smoke and tar and metal and gray, mostly
But before this happened
Maybe we should have considered the end.
Upheaval of the general public,
Together our efforts combine and twist, strengthing like roots underground,seeking water
In the fresh soil, extending deep and forming the foundation of our character.
No more puppet show,
Sorry kids.
We can save ourselves or we can
Save each other.

1 comment:

  1. ahh love it!! and im sure the judges will too! especially since it's the theme but it's not what you would expect it to be and it's original. that reminds me, i gotta get working on that...hehe

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